Hi Favio
When I am trying to write a song and feel I am stuck, I reach out to someone with what I have. I have written a few by myself, but sometimes I get stuck.
You have 4 chords and lyrics but you want to add color. So it appears you are stuck as I am sometimes. Do you have anyone you can reach out to and have them listen to what you have? If you don’t have those people now, you can develop those relationships.
In 1 of my songs, Dave Celentano, one of the instructors here, came up with the bridge for me. And I have another talented person helping me with something I am working on now that frankly steals from Magic Sam. The song is 90% - but 90% isn’t 100, so unless Scott can come up with something, it will go to the bin.
But I have to be willing to give those I want to help, something to hear.
This year the diet is definitely gonna stick!