Thanks for listening and for the feedback.

The other thing would be to think about your tone

I usually play heavier crunchy type rhythm stuff and I used my favorite tone (yes I'm one of those heavy metal guys) and it is my first stab at an improv.

so I found myself constantly trying to block out one or the other

After listening a few times it seems if the keyboards were gone it would have sounded better lol. But I just took everything I have learned packed it all in there till I got lost then hit stop. I have already started reworking it I'm going to put a little more time and effort into it.

Again thanks for all the encouragement and feedback. all feedback and criticism is welcome

Doug