Feedback on new tune please


Twangerdanger
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11/07/2010 3:55 am
I would like any kind of feedback on this new tune.

I play and record everything myself in my little bedroom studio.

Thanks!

http://www.atlanticplumbing.net/gravity.mp3
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11/07/2010 2:45 pm
Sounds good man, I enjoyed it. I think there's only one think I could suggest.
Maybe it you added more contrast in the speed of your playing here and there (play slower, then a bit faster, then "regular speed") it would make it eve more interesting.
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11/07/2010 5:42 pm
Very nice job there!

I'm an 80s rock type guy so typically I pay more attention to 80's rock tones. Having said that I'd like to think I can appreciate nice tones. One of the things that caught my attention first was your EXCELLENT full, warm rock/country tone.
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11/07/2010 8:58 pm
Thanks for your comments,

I am just learning how to record and mix. I got Sonar 8.5 a few months ago and I am learning a little more cool stuff every week.
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11/14/2010 2:30 am
Hey Guys!

I just remixed the song. Please let me know if it is any better. Before, it was muddy sounding.
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11/19/2010 4:26 am
I don't have any feedback but I like it
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11/24/2010 5:26 am
Thanks!

I did another remix today, just to try and get it a little smoother.
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11/24/2010 8:37 pm
i like it alot! the only thing i would suggest is to make the fact that your using scales so notable. the intro almost sounds like your rehearsing your scales ,lol....though,i do really like it alot,man.
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12/13/2010 1:33 am
Thanks!

I can't read a lick of music, and I don't know what scales or chords I play most of the time anyway. I just have fun doing it.
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12/13/2010 3:40 am
I really enjoyed the piece. I am not sure I will ever be that good.

Only thing I could see missing is a voice part.
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12/15/2010 6:19 pm
Sounds good man! I really like your playing!
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