day by day

ok hey yall, i decided to post another song, now dont worry this ones not that good , but not as bad as the other song i posted :p needless to mention that one, but this is a song ive worked on all day today, and like i said its not that great of a song, uh i guess you'd say it came from the heart, i dont talk about my feelings so i decided to write them but also using a few extras.. i guess um all comments are appreciated and advice too i would like to get better at writin songs, neways so i hope yall enjoy its kinda short but i dont want to make it too long so im still deciding if its done.oh and it sounds better with the music. :D

Day by Day

people see me just as some white trash
just cuz i could use a little extra cash
and cuz i dont understand this life of today
never knowin whats gonna get in your way,
so they just say, im wastin my life away.... day by day

so as i sit and ponder in my thoughts of despair
then i look up and see her picture hangin there
and i catch myself wonderin what i'd be like
if she was still here livin with me.... day by day

maybe things would be different
maybe then i wouldnt be so alone,
if only she wasnt gone
i know im gonna see her one day,
but oh how i wish that day was today
if only i could have it my way

so i try to remember all our times, ...day by day
she was the best sister anyone could ever have
even when i made her mad
and as i come back to my senses
i realize my thoughts are just endless

and what good does thinkin do
unless you can act upon your thoughts too .... day by day
but i feel like im spendin the rest of my life waitin for just one day
is that .... pointless...or relentless ... but i guess theres no way to say
maybe i really am just white trash
in need of a little cash..... wastin my life away.... day by day

That would actually make a pretty goo country song. Nice job on it.

Originally Posted by: elklanderccThat would actually make a pretty good country song. Nice job on it.

thanks creta yeah i guess you could consider it a country song with the music idk it could go a few ways u kno. but thanks and good luck on that fishy :D anymore feedback?

okay now after a few suggestions from one of my best friends that came over today, he saw my song layin out and helped me work out the more rough spots not many changes but i guess it sounds better then before what do yall think?