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Musically your guitar lines are well played, but I would try to expand my sound a little bit by adding some secondary chords that enhance the melody of the main chordal motif. I think the biggest issue is your singing. They need more work or spend more time practicing it. All the basic elements are there, just more practice and you'll have a much more rounded product that won't be denied. Good job, and keep practicing.
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