Random verses, lemme know what you think

here are some random verses I made up for a song I've been wroking on, just using the same guitar part and making up lines to fit it. Let me know what you think of them. That second one is inspired by french toast :D

I think you should be the leader 'cause
I don't know how to follow through
If I could do one thing then
That would be one more than you

Take from both and then get sad
Doesn't keep you full for long
If it's not good, at least it's bad
If you don't do you don't do wrong.

Woke up this morning, felt like something that I wasn't
And I started thinking maybe that I was something that I'm not
And something from my past came into my present
And it kind of overshadowed the other presents that I got

There is another one, but I'll have to add it when I can get home and look in my notebook because I can't remember it at the moment.

I like the first two. The last one.......meh.

By the way, you should post that song you wrote with that one wykked-kool verse in it.

Originally Posted by: earthman buckyou should post that song you wrote with that one wykked-kool verse in it.

Which one was that? The "my child" one?

Yeah, but I liked it better when it was "my baby."

okay, i will later, but for now let's get some feedback on this one.

Pretty standard emo stuff. Good job.

Not bad. With the right music you got some pretty good lyrics.

Originally Posted by: Jolly McJollysonPretty standard emo stuff. Good job.

Actually I just write things that sound interesting and fit the music at hand. I don't do it so I can say, look at me, I have feelings. In fact, it's lucky I don't have feelings, or I would be offended! :p