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Grambo
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Grambo
halfway to somewhere
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12/22/2005 1:03 pm
I bought some cheap baccy
went straight to my head
I now realise
It contains Lead
if you always take the lazy route
The Devil knows your every move ![COLOR=RoyalBlue]
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Infectious
Mr. Hardcore Oldschool
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Infectious
Mr. Hardcore Oldschool
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12/22/2005 3:51 pm
I like it but...What the hell is baccy? :confused:
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ericthecableguy
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ericthecableguy
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12/22/2005 7:43 pm
Tobacco perhaps?
Funny little ditty. :)

Just a suggestion. The last line should flow better. Maybe add a word before lead.
For life is quite absurd and death's the final word, You must always face the curtain with a bow
Forget about your sin - give the audience a grin
Enjoy it - it's your last chance anyhow.
METOOB
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magicninja
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magicninja
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12/22/2005 10:50 pm
I now realize
it may contain lead.


I like the way that sounds because it leaves the listener with a level of uncertainty.
Magicninja
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ericthecableguy
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ericthecableguy
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12/23/2005 9:06 pm
Its friggin hilarious!
For life is quite absurd and death's the final word, You must always face the curtain with a bow
Forget about your sin - give the audience a grin
Enjoy it - it's your last chance anyhow.
METOOB
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