this is a song that I wrote a while back, I finally recorded it... but I can't sing, so I kinda left out the lyrics and made it instrumental... so it's not the exact same format as what I originally wrote, it was changed slightly to become an instrumental song without being entirely boring.. (the section where you hear the distorted guitar would normally go on 4 times longer!!! lol) but yeah, this song means alot to me, I'll post the lyrics too. but here it is
Sometimes
Lyrics:
Sometimes this world gets a little crazy and it gets a little scary and we don’t know what’s going on
Sometimes this world gets a little hazy and we don’t know where to turn to cause we can’t see through the fog
Sometimes we get a little mislead and we can’t find the right path cause all we see is wrong
Sometimes we get a little put down, people delight in our frown and we can’t seem to get along
Sometimes it feels like it would be better if we just left them a letter saying we’ll be gone
Sometimes this world can be a bad place, we go from a happy to a sad place; all our joy is gone
Sometimes our lives seem to be controlled watching things unload faster than a gun
Sometimes we get a little afraid and all we can do is pray that we can remain strong
Sometimes we need someone to run to, someone to cling to, someone to hold us in their arms
Sometimes it feels like a journey to find someone caring but I’m not very far
Sometimes we need a little assurance that we will get through this and life will go on
Sometimes this world gets a little lonely, but I’ll be your friend, your comfort, I’ll help you remain strong
I just want you to be happy we’ll get through this somehow and I’ll hold you in my arms
my song
# 1
bad link ?
Akira says;
"i was expecting some 3476 string string skipping with some 23489172343 octave sweeps and some alt picking runs at 345734237623572bpm in 234872364781246164516th notes across your 2384723648724627348623478264 fret guitar"
"i was expecting some 3476 string string skipping with some 23489172343 octave sweeps and some alt picking runs at 345734237623572bpm in 234872364781246164516th notes across your 2384723648724627348623478264 fret guitar"
# 2
bad link I think!!
Akira says;
"i was expecting some 3476 string string skipping with some 23489172343 octave sweeps and some alt picking runs at 345734237623572bpm in 234872364781246164516th notes across your 2384723648724627348623478264 fret guitar"
"i was expecting some 3476 string string skipping with some 23489172343 octave sweeps and some alt picking runs at 345734237623572bpm in 234872364781246164516th notes across your 2384723648724627348623478264 fret guitar"
# 3
I like it!! sounds good and I can see those lyrics fitting well with it good song :D I like the solo too nice note choices :cool:
Akira says;
"i was expecting some 3476 string string skipping with some 23489172343 octave sweeps and some alt picking runs at 345734237623572bpm in 234872364781246164516th notes across your 2384723648724627348623478264 fret guitar"
"i was expecting some 3476 string string skipping with some 23489172343 octave sweeps and some alt picking runs at 345734237623572bpm in 234872364781246164516th notes across your 2384723648724627348623478264 fret guitar"
# 4
^^^^^^^Exactly what he said! Great job dude! Keep up the great work.
# 5
pretty good dude it sounds like something i would make up.the solo needs a little work but overall good job
# 6
Originally Posted by: CW14The solo needs to be a bit smoother
I did realize this. I made the song, then left for a while, came back a couple hours later and noticed a couple things I didn't before, so, I might make some updates in the next couple days
# 7