Another song already!?

Yeah, why the hell not? This is just a first draft, so don't be too harsh, now.

[NEEDS TO GO]I greet you, master
I ask no more than recognition
for my work describing quantifying human nature
quantifying living value...consider it...
calculated.

Molding my plaster
I disapprove of exhibition
of this sympathy and feeling rigormortus you call
feelings of forlorn disjunct...consider it...
confiscated.[/NEEDS TO GO]

And don't you complain when I
Take it all away
Don't think I'll refrain until I
Fake another way
You think you can make your stand out
ON YOUR OWN
But I'll reveal and treat your problems
That were never known.

Morning, companion
I see you're up so bright and early
show me samples of your empathetic recognition
sympathetic disposition...consider it...
out of date.

Call it a canyon
Although you may prefer "a mountain"
that we have to climb relinquishing those sad emotions
rash and foolish bad emotions...consider it...
An ill trait.

And don't you complain when I
Take it all away
Don't think I'll refrain until I
Fake another way
You think you can handle issues
ON YOUR OWN
But only I can help you
Supress what isn't known.

Were never known....were never known
Why do you think why do you feel why must rebellion be your zeal?
Why do you cry why do you laugh can "feelings" act on your behalf?

Silence surrounding
I'll plainly ask a favor from you
would you take this pill in taking it depress your will
confess and so repress your will...consider it...
lock and key.

Rhythmical pounding
We'll nail the edges of your coffin
Would you please assist us? take our pills and don't resist us
don't resist what we can give you...consider it...
a Gift from me.

And don't you complain when I
Take it all away
Don't think I'll refrain until I
Fake another way
You think you can make your stand out
ON YOUR OWN
But I'll reveal and treat your problems
That were never known.

We can't allow this,
It's quite unfair to other people
Can't you understand your rationale is falling short
And Falling short quite horribly...consider it...
Ill informed.

You call it harness,
Though "equilibrium"s the name
But you're not thinking right, so think the way we all must do
and think the way we tell you to...consider it...
quite conformed.

And don't you complain when I
Take it all away
Don't think I'll refrain until I
Fake another way
You think you can make your stand out
ON YOUR OWN
But I'll reveal and treat your problems
That were never known.


Were never known....were never known
Why do you think why do you feel why must rebellion be your zeal?
Why do you cry why do you laugh can "feelings" act on your behalf?

And don't you complain when I
Take it all away
Don't think I'll refrain until I
Fake another way
You think you can make your stand out
ON YOUR OWN
But I'll reveal and treat your problems
That were never known.

whoa...first of all, i love the topic. There awesome awesome lyrics. Goes rele deep man. Why isnt can't i write that well?

unfortunatley i am too busy and lazy too read through the whole thing. but as far as i got, these arre very very good lyrics. Good job

Thats really good, a lot different then your usually writing style. A lot more serious. All the lines are really well thought out, and yeah as I said before its good.

hmm...kind of odd, haha. I think of this as one of the best songs I've written, and it's received the least attention of my three songs up now. Sadness :( .

Sure beats the hell out of anything I've pulled out on first draft.

Nice One Jolly!