Dr Simon.. maybe what you're trying to say is.. its not really a song. Theres the little bit with the bass and guitar (in unison I believe) that is repeated a couple of times. But aside from that, its just jamming over a bass lick.

Thats how I feel at least.

I like the playing though, although it gets a ltitle boring after a while. Maybe you need some wider intervals, some badass rhythmic groupings.. something kind of Shawn Lane-ish.