Honestly, don't be hard on yourself. It was good. I think you have a good idea of where you're with regard to your playing from what I read around here at GT. So, as we all do at all levels, have room to grow. In listening to this, I think you have a really good send of melody and timing. You have a sense of where you she be in the key you're playing. Very important. Build from that.

Good job!