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BlackBox
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BlackBox
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Joined: 05/29/02
Posts: 42
06/01/2002 7:47 pm
One flash It happend so fast
Things got messed up incredibly quick
Has time frozen?
Why does it have to happen to her?
why not someone else?
Someone who deserves it,
not her, not her.
She is too sweet,
too nice, too hot.

Things got ****ed up again.
Things just got ****ed up again.
Just make it all go away,
make them all go away.
Just make it stop,
things just got ****ed up again.

It all got complicated again,
You just never know when.
Its like the world has stopped,
like a car with no motor...
it just stopped.
Will it ever start going again,
It will, but when?

Things got ****ed up again.
Things just got ****ed up again.
Just make it all go away,
make them all go away.
Just make it stop,
things just got ****ed up again.

Its all a waste of time,
Its all for one more dime.
Fine, you got your dime,
what now?
now, your stuck in a hole.
Its the biggest one ever,
How are we going to get out?




well thats the first song i've ever written and I wrote it one night when I found out about how one of my good friends was physically abused by her dad. What you guys think?
Rock on.