Hey Tyler,

I wouldn't go too public with your music just yet. I have a couple of suggestions for you to improve it... First, subscribe to guitartricks.com as a full access student and take as many lessons as you can for at least a year. Second, get some decent recording gear and learn how to record stuff clearly - doesn't mean you cant have a distorted tone but you don't want to have totally distorted recordings especially if it's your vocals that are peaking out. Third, get a band together - punk and grunge music sounds better with drums and bass in the mix. And last of all, either take some singing lessons or at least listen very carefully to your favorite vocalists and try and emulate what they do - especially in relation to dynamics (variation in tone, timbre, volume etc). Your style of music is not a science but with some basic study and discipline you will be able to record something people will like much sooner.