Thanks! I use it as an audition test. :)

I previously got good (meaning constructive) comments about transitions in another song that has some sudden changes and should use lead in to new parts, etc. I just wanted to show I was not intimidated. :D (But I do appreciate and consider all input.)

If you go back in time, I was much more melodic. This one I wrote in the 80's called All Given Up
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