Hi Finger - great take! I really like your change in tone...stick with that, i think it really suits your playing style. You have some really interesting bits in there and some nice runs with a nice jazzy feel with that tone. The only thing I would suggest is to incorporate more hammer ons/pull offs rather than picking every single note. There were many places where that sounded good, but also many spots where the runs would have blended better and maybe a combo of these two syles would make the repetition less noticeable. It would also sound a lot less mechanical and give you more opportunity to showcase your style. Good call in changing it up though, particularly on this track which wouldnt really suit a heavy distorted tone. The double string slides were a nice touch!