GREAT peice Jolly. I really like this version. I think the reader can really relate to Adam. I know I can anyway. Heck man, you know how I feel about your talent. I've been trying for 30 years to master something you seem to do with ease!
I just may have to throw myself in front of a bus.... ;)
In all seriousness, I like it. You done good.
[FONT=Tahoma]"All I can do is be me ... whoever that is". Bob Dylan [/FONT]