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acapella
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acapella
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02/06/2007 8:40 pm
I see your point about rushing past the climax of the story, however I also don't want to make the story about killing. Maybe I should make that part more interesting so you feel less cheated, I'm not sure yet, but I don't want to make it the focus of the story either. So I'll have to think about that for a while.
You go outside and practice screaming. We'll play music while you're gone.