Josh...thanks, I guess you could call it "trippy" if not necessarily good. It was mostly made up on the spot with no real planning as to what it would be about, with some minor changes I made when I looked back so that it was consistent before handing it in to the teacher. Maybe that's my thing though...
If I do write any more, I'll show you, since you enjoy it so much.
You go outside and practice screaming. We'll play music while you're gone.
