Need help, suggestions, lyrics?, ideas...

Ok... like usual, I come to Guitar Tricks to get advice from yooz guys, when I'm totally stuck on where to go with a song.......and this tune is a major hodgepodge of stuff thrown together.
The different parts are totally edited together but they seem to fit to a certain extent.
I wrote some temporary lyrics that don't make any sense.

Now I gotta re-record it so it makes sense and flows from beginning to end.

Guess what I wanna know is, is it worth continuing... is it a song you could get used to listening to and eventually like....
... what's missing... what does it need...
is there anything you like about it that makes you wanna listen to it again?

http://s93744050.onlinehome.us/OrdinaryDayTest.mp3

During the chorus, try to imagine a 4 part backup harmony & keep in mind the vocals are done in one take and aren't exactly 'performance level'.

I need to go through and redo most of the instruments so they're better recorded and more intense and cleaner...

Also.... I'm wondering if it needs a middle bridge or something to change it up a bit.