Originally Posted by: jimmy_kwtxStand back, I've got the sun in my hand.

This is the only part of the song I liked. Well, I liked the song, but I don't think it fits the purpose. The rest of it seems like you're trying to make it into something it isn't. Most of the words don't fit the story, you know what I'm saying? In a song like this, a f*** you song, it should be really straight forward and to the point, no dicking around with lyrical flourishes that make it harder to see the real point of the song. In my opinion anyway. The chorus especially, I don't think it fits this song.