I think the hearts of men like me shouldn't be made to bleed
I think it could kind of be made into a song with an avenged sevenfold type energy. It probably sounds better to music. I suggest working on it. One thing you have to make sure to avoid when writing depressing songs like that is using cliches. I'd look up some other words, or throw some absract lines in there.
Anyways, if this isn't what you wanted to hear, disregard the post.
Good luck with school and such. Hakkunah Matata. :cool:
For life is quite absurd and death's the final word, You must always face the curtain with a bow
Forget about your sin - give the audience a grin
Enjoy it - it's your last chance anyhow.
METOOB
Forget about your sin - give the audience a grin
Enjoy it - it's your last chance anyhow.
METOOB
