Originally Posted by: Blues_ManTake this as positive advice. The rhythm was waay off on the beginning. It was rushed and kinda sloppy. Sounds like you have it memorized, so what you need to do is play it over and over. and play it precise on the beat and smoothly. It was kinda choppy. Another thing, is make sure your bends are in tune, other wise it'll sound wrong. But keep practicing, it'll get better!

thanks man. i only learned the solo 2 days ago so sorry about its sloppyness. ill get to redo it again sometime when i get better.