My New Song Lyrics...


paterlizzi
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paterlizzi
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02/19/2006 9:44 am
Probably messed up, late last night
Shoulda went coulda, up was down, left was right
Yes I know I'm wrong, but it didnt take that long
to see my way through

Oh baby, You drive me crazy
but i cant ever stop loving you
then you fix it, life is a bitch
oh forever, the whole way through

So tell now whats up,why cant one of us be right
Oh is so damn hard, becuase your always just outta sight
There has to be a toll, this all cant be null
when love, sees it way through

Oh baby, I drive you crazy
but can you ever stop loving me
so we messed up, my hearts a torn cup
it cant ever hold a grudge on you

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please tell me if you guys think this a good start to my new song, i have a John Mayerish style of playing and singing. Its a acoustic song capo 4th
F-A5 Strumming/Finger Pick/Slap mix and the the chorus which is when it says "Oh Baby" C#m-Bm-Emish-Bm starting barred on the 9th the beat is
its a 3 beat in my lingo as in a 1..1..1..1.. i hope u guys figure it out and maybe even like it :p
[FONT=Century Gothic]-Pat "Well, nobody could have foreseen this" Terlizzi[/FONT]
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Lordathestrings
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02/19/2006 4:22 pm
It doesn't scan well. Maybe it settles into the rhythm better when it has music with it?
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magicninja
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02/20/2006 4:10 am
Yeah I can't read a good rythm either.
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heknowsnothing
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02/25/2006 11:49 pm
record that with a rythym and it might just work out :cool:
Im not ok. Im not okhayhay. Im not ok.
Im not O f****n K.
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