Thanks for the comments DrSimon.

I'll take the "squeaky clinically clean" as a compliment. :D
I was aiming at a bit of an industrial sound, so I tried to keep things as "tight" as possible.

I'd love to add vocals to it, but I'm not much of a vocalist myself so I'll have to see if I can find someone to do it for me.
As far as adding other instruments... perhaps some keys or synth, haven't really thought about that yet. Any suggestions anybody?

I agree on your comment on the dynamics. I figured some nice vocals would finish things up, make it more complete.

All in all, this recording was more of an experiment/exercise with recording than it was meant to be a finished song. But perhaps it can be made into something...